Sunday, January 1, 2012

Make Paragraphs from the Outline

A. Outline
  • Topic : I Have Three Favorite Places to Spend My Weekend
I. I like natural places
1.     The place is natural, clean and comfort
2.     There are  many visitors and securities
3.     The ticket for entering that place is cheap
      II. The place has many interesting objects
1.     In that places, there are many objects can be enjoyed
2.     The object is free to be enjoyed
3.     The object is well taken care of the manager
B. Paragraph
My Heavens of the Weekend
                        Hey friend, do you like traveling or spending your spare time in the weekend? I think a considerable part of you like weekend, and also me too. Then, I will share to you about my favorite places to spending my time in the weekend, and I called my heavens of the weekend, because there are many beautiful things make me happy to see them.
                        First place, I like spending my weekend at mountain Kelud, why I like that place? In there I could get the beautiful, interesting and natural sceneries. I could see many trees, hill and exactly the way free from traffic jam. The air is fresh because there is not much transportation. Although the way is not good enough, I still enjoyed the trip.
                        Besides that, in mount Kelud I found many seller, but the price is expensive because that is tourism object. And I disappointed because the taste and the price is not related, I mean the price is expensive but the taste is not good like the price. Usually, I went to mount Kelud if I got long holiday. I spent a day full, I went at the morning, and I came home at the evening.
                        Second place, I like go to beach, especially in Tambakrejo beach, that is a favorite beach in Blitar regency. Why I like beach? Because I am happy if I see the sea and the wave furthermore I would get blow softly wind. At the holiday, there are many visitors, so the manager adds more securities to pacify that place.
                        The other reason why I like go to beach is the ticket is very cheap and achieved for the people, just 3000 Rupiahs per person, and we can enter the gate and see the expensive scenery from God. Sometime I saw many fishermen when I went there, and not rare I bought some fishes from the fisherman as a gift to my family in the home, and my family likes fish from sea.
                        The third place which I like is swimming pool. I like swimming and playing the water. Swimming is good for us because can be burned our fat moreover I am a fat boy, so swimming is good to controlled my fat. In swimming poll, we can found slipping board, water bucket and many other playing objects.
                        And the important matter, the objects are free to be enjoyed. The manager didn’t ask extra money from us to enjoy the playing objects. But in the big swimming pool, we must pay to enjoy the entertaining objects, for example mini train, roller coaster, house of the ghost, etc. But, in Blitar regency, especially in Sumber Udel water pool, we are free to enjoy the entertaining objects like above.
                        Almost my favorite places to spending my weekend are well taken care of the manager, and the visitors can be enjoying the thing in there. My favorite places are clean, comfort and gratify, and suggest you to visit them. I wish you agree with me after visiting that places. And we must proud because Blitar has many interesting tourism object.        

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